COMMISSION: Every Star In The Sky

Hi, here's what I felt about your art (Just my opinion, which can also be totally wrong). Though it's unique and packs a certain feel to it, there are a few things that I felt were off.

First is the correlation between, what we see through the window and door. The top half of the room is well lit when seen through the door,whereas it's the exact opposite when seen through the window. I know you were going for the night sky effect for the window, but still looks kinda odd when placed near the view of the room through the door.

Second, is the perspective of the room, especially for the placement of the wall at the back end.

And the third, is I felt that the window portion is kind of flat and suffers some loss of depth.

Overall, it's a beautiful piece of work which invoked the right kind of emotions, in spite of me perceiving some minor flaws.